This is excellent. I liked the clear explanation of the ubiquity of patriarchy. That is often very hard to get across.
You have a failure of parallelism in an early paragraph, where things are lined up nicely, but you go from the gerund, "ignoring" to the infinitive, "to deny."
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Date: 2013-07-18 04:58 pm (UTC)You have a failure of parallelism in an early paragraph, where things are lined up nicely, but you go from the gerund, "ignoring" to the infinitive, "to deny."
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